Monday, April 1, 2019
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I think next time you should edit properly before posting and maybe have a bit more facts.But other than that its good. :)
ReplyDeleteI really like it but maybe add some more facts and edit more before posting
ReplyDeleteWell done on your research project. I like the use of statistics to back up what you are saying. You have done a great job of choosing effective pictures to enhance your text. It is well written in your own words and Having small chunks of text on each slide is easier for your reader to digest (no pun intended.) Two things to consider for next time. 1) when you are editing make sure you check for place names requiring capital letters as there are a few of these missing. 2) Consider putting your recommendations on the final page as bullet points. Shaping the text this way makes your message more effective.
ReplyDeleteHi Carmen. I really like the facts about the size of the great garbage patch. I also really like the pictures on all the slides and the information. Next time you could add some links, and maybe more information about the turtles diet. you can check out my blog at https://rsbcallumt.blogspot.com
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